Bara Cailín 3: 33 ‘not another peep’

November 18th, 2015

The inside of the bus was very dark.

Mac could barely make out the seats in front of him.

‘Sit down, Grandpa,’ said a rough voice and Mac was pushed onto the closest seat. ‘Not another peep out of you.’

In the seat beside him someone sat sobbing quietly.

‘I’ve been here for three days now,’ she whispered. ‘Some of us have been here even longer.’

‘Quiet!’ said the voice. ‘I thought I said no talking.’

But Mac just didn’t understand.

‘Who are you?’ he shouted. ‘What do you want with us?’

‘What do we want?’ mocked the voice. ‘What do we want?’

Mac heard a laugh.

‘I’ll tell you what we want.’

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November 18, 2015

Barnaby Taylor

Author, Bara Cailín, Fiction, Writing

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5 responses to “Bara Cailín 3: 33 ‘not another peep’”

michaeljharris2015 says:

November 19, 2015 at 5:30 pm

From reading this, I’m intrigued to continue to read your post. Keep up the hard work, you have an unique writing style.

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- Barnaby Taylor says:
  
  November 19, 2015 at 6:50 pm
  
  Hi Michael, many thanks for taking a look and giving me some feedback. I really appreciate it.
  
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  - michaeljharris2015 says:
    
    December 1, 2015 at 8:05 am
    
    You’re welcome, anytime. I recently started reading Falcon Boy and I love it!
    
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  - Barnaby Taylor says:
    
    December 1, 2015 at 8:47 am
    
    Hi Michael, I’m thrilled to hear that you downloaded Falcon Boy and are enjoying it. If you still feel the same about the book by the end would you please leave a review somewhere. I would really appreciate it.Many thanks, Barnaby
    
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  - michaeljharris2015 says:
    
    December 1, 2015 at 5:04 pm
    
    Sure thing bud.
    
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BARNABY TAYLOR

Bara Cailín 3: 33 ‘not another peep’

The inside of the bus was very dark.

Mac could barely make out the seats in front of him.

‘Sit down, Grandpa,’ said a rough voice and Mac was pushed onto the closest seat. ‘Not another peep out of you.’

In the seat beside him someone sat sobbing quietly.

‘I’ve been here for three days now,’ she whispered. ‘Some of us have been here even longer.’

‘Quiet!’ said the voice. ‘I thought I said no talking.’

But Mac just didn’t understand.

‘Who are you?’ he shouted. ‘What do you want with us?’

‘What do we want?’ mocked the voice. ‘What do we want?’

Mac heard a laugh.

‘I’ll tell you what we want.’

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Bara Cailín 3: 33 ‘not another peep’

The inside of the bus was very dark.

Mac could barely make out the seats in front of him.

‘Sit down, Grandpa,’ said a rough voice and Mac was pushed onto the closest seat. ‘Not another peep out of you.’

In the seat beside him someone sat sobbing quietly.

‘I’ve been here for three days now,’ she whispered. ‘Some of us have been here even longer.’

‘Quiet!’ said the voice. ‘I thought I said no talking.’

But Mac just didn’t understand.

‘Who are you?’ he shouted. ‘What do you want with us?’

‘What do we want?’ mocked the voice. ‘What do we want?’

Mac heard a laugh.

‘I’ll tell you what we want.’

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