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Did you know that the human body is capable of amazing things? For example, our stomach acid is strong enough to dissolve a razor blade! In a study, scientists found that a razor blade dissolved in just two hours of being in our stomach acid, thanks to its pH level of 1.0 to 2.0 on the scale of 0 to 14.

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And have you ever wondered about the number of stars in the Milky Way? Experts believe that there could be anywhere from 100 billion to 400 billion stars, but that’s just a drop in the bucket compared to the estimated 3.04 trillion trees on our planet!

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And did you know that the human body is home to a staggering amount of bacteria and human cells? The ratio is roughly 1:1.3, with experts estimating that we have 39 trillion bacteria and 30 trillion human cells.

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And have you heard about the tropical fungus Ophiocordyceps? It infects ants’ central nervous systems and after 9 days, it has complete control over the ant’s movements. According to National Geographic, the fungus forces the ant to climb trees, convulse, and fall into the cool, moist soil below where the fungus thrives. It then forces the ant to bite a leaf and wait for death at exactly solar noon.

The Importance of a Good Introduction

Your introduction is the first impression your readers will have of your writing. It sets the tone for the rest of your piece and can make or break the reader’s engagement with your writing. An engaging introduction can draw the reader in and make them want to read more, while a lacklustre introduction can turn them off and make them lose interest.

The Elements of a Good Introduction

A good introduction should have the following elements:

A hook to grab the reader’s attention

A clear thesis statement to set the direction of your piece

Background information to provide context for your message

A roadmap to outline the structure of your piece

Strategies for Writing Engaging Introductions

To write engaging introductions, try the following strategies:

Start with a surprising statistic, quote, or anecdote

Ask a question that piques the reader’s curiosity

Make a bold statement or claim

Use vivid language to set the tone for your piece

Exercise: Write an introduction for a piece of writing you are working on, focusing on making it engaging and memorable. Pay attention to the elements of a good introduction and think about how you can use them to draw the reader in and make them want to read more. Here are twelve more writing exercises you could use to help develop your introductions:

  1. Start with a question: Begin your introduction with a thought-provoking question that draws readers into your story or topic. For example, Have you ever wondered what it would be like to travel through time?
  2. Set the scene: Describe the setting of your story or article in vivid detail, making sure to set the tone and mood for what’s to come. For example, The sun was setting over the misty mountains, casting an orange glow across the sky.
  3. Introduce the protagonist: If you’re writing a story, introduce your main character right away and give readers a sense of who they are and what they’re like. For example, John was a quiet and reserved young man who lived a simple life.
  4. Provide background information: If your topic requires some background information to understand, provide it in the introduction. For example, The concept of artificial intelligence has been around for decades, but it wasn’t until recently that it became a reality.
  5. Offer a thesis statement: If you’re writing an essay, offer a clear and concise thesis statement in your introduction that lays out the main point you’ll be arguing.
  6. Use a hook: Start your introduction with a hook that grabs readers’ attention and makes them want to read on. This could be a surprising statistic, a quote, or a vivid description. For example, It was the kind of mystery that kept you up at night, wondering what really happened.
  7. Provide context: Give readers some context for why your story or article is important or relevant to them. For example, The increasing use of technology in our daily lives has raised questions about privacy and security.
  8. Create a tone: Set the tone of your story or article in the introduction. This will help to establish what readers can expect from the rest of the piece. For example, The castle was dark and foreboding, and I couldn’t help but feel like I was being watched.
  9. Use a personal anecdote: If you’re writing an article or essay, consider starting with a personal anecdote that relates to your topic. For example, I never imagined that a walk in the woods would change my life forever.
  10. Cite a famous quote: Start your introduction with a famous quote that relates to your topic. This will give readers a sense of the tone and subject matter, and it can also be a great hook.
  11. Provide a definition: If you’re writing about a complex or technical subject, consider starting with a definition that explains what it is and why it’s important. For example, Blockchain technology is a decentralised and secure way of recording transactions that has the potential to revolutionise many industries.
  12. Use humour: If appropriate, consider starting your introduction with a joke or a humorous remark that will get readers in the right mood for what’s to come. For example, I always thought aliens were just a figment of people’s imagination – until I saw one for myself.

Writing engaging introductions is an essential part of effective writing. By making a strong first impression, you can set the tone for your piece and ensure that the reader is invested in what you have to say. Take the time to craft your introduction carefully, using strategies like hooks, thesis statements, and vivid language to make it memorable and engaging.

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Finally, as you sit at your machine waiting for inspiration to strike and for the words to start forming, console yourself that you are not writing about Scottish snow as apparently there are 421 words for snow, including sneesl (to start raining or snowing); feefle (to swirl); and flinkdrinkin (a light snow).

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