As she pulled the small tin from her wet bag the touch of the metal caused a twin surge of terrible loss and wonderful love to issue forth from the chambers of Inteachán’s tiny heart.
For, and despite all world-saving appearances to the contrary, Inteachán’s loss was still too close and too recent for her to do anything other than be totally overwhelmed once more.
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An unknown time passed before Inteachán was ready to begin again. She reached back into her rucksack and pulled out her spare penlight. She turned the penlight on and pointed.
Like a chalk line barely drawn across the blackness of infinity Inteachán’s beam hardly touched the dark.
I always like reading your post. In the short post, I see creativity and I love the flow. For your stories, do you finish the stories first then post them and did you get an ISBN number before you post it? I want to follow in your foot steps and post my own stories, hopefully paving a way into the self-publishing / publishing industry. Keep up the work!
Hi Michael, thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it! I try and write 100 words a day every day. I manage this most of the time. With Bara Cailin I am slightly ahead at the moment and rely on scheduling posts for the most part. I am planning to complete 5 chapters and then publish the whole thing as a book. I am also working on Volume 2 of the Falcon Boy series which I hope will arrive sometime in 2016. As you know running a blog is hard work but I do think that the key is to publish regularly. I look forward to reading your work. Good luck with it! Kind regards, Barnaby
BARNABY TAYLOR 
I love the ending line, it’s very powerful
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Hi Christina, many thanks for reading the post and commenting on my writing. I really appreciate your feedback. Kind regards, Barnaby
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I always like reading your post. In the short post, I see creativity and I love the flow. For your stories, do you finish the stories first then post them and did you get an ISBN number before you post it? I want to follow in your foot steps and post my own stories, hopefully paving a way into the self-publishing / publishing industry. Keep up the work!
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Hi Michael, thank you so much for your feedback. I really appreciate it! I try and write 100 words a day every day. I manage this most of the time. With Bara Cailin I am slightly ahead at the moment and rely on scheduling posts for the most part. I am planning to complete 5 chapters and then publish the whole thing as a book. I am also working on Volume 2 of the Falcon Boy series which I hope will arrive sometime in 2016. As you know running a blog is hard work but I do think that the key is to publish regularly. I look forward to reading your work. Good luck with it! Kind regards, Barnaby
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You’re welcome and thank you kindly for the tips Barnaby! I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.
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